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Episode #9

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21:41 4 Jan

This was scaring me more than when he was angry. I pulled
away, instinctively, but froze when I caught him Looking at me
again. He still had one hand on my shoulder, and after a long
time of feeling like a rabbit in front of a snake, he moved
closer to me.

I knew what he was going to do, but I was so paralyzed with
fear that the only thing I could do was close my eyes as he bent
his head down.

When his lips touched mine, it felt like I'd been
electrocuted. Without thinking, I opened my mouth to his, and he
held me tighter as he frantically kissed me. My arms were being
jammed into my chest, so I slid them out, alongside his body,
but he just pulled me closer.

And he was still kissing me. And my body was responding
like it was Debbie.

He was desperate for something, I could tell, because he
just kept moving around, like he was looking for something to
make him whole. Something in me. The perfect kiss. Me, I was
scared to death, and my chest hurt, and I was losing my body,
and there was this _surge_ going on that I'd only ever felt with
Debbie.

"Mmmmmmmyeah," I said as Travis began nibbling on my neck.
He touched my shoulder, then, and caressed it in a way that left
me breathless, which sort of went away when he said, "CUT!!"

---And suddenly the harsh glare of the lights overhead and the
dirty look that Ellen Hayes had begun directing towards me
chased away the haze that was my head at this point and I
remembered who and what I was supposed to be.

"What?" I tried. But I really should have known better..

***
22:02 4 Jan

We were all seated in the Director's trailer, waiting for
the situatuion to calm itself while Ms. Hayes did her best to
verbally rip me several new assholes and being anything BUT calm
as she paced back and forth. Finally she seemed to have spent
the most of her anger and the room was silent as she continued
to give me The Look.

"Well?" she asked. "Would you like to explain to me and
the rest of the cast why you decided to fool around when you
knew that we were rolling and that we were already several weeks
behind schedule?"

Tucker couldn't help but feel herself begin to blush as she
responded, "I got carried away--it's not my fault that you
decided to cast my fiance as a love intrest...."
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02:17 14 May

It was well known that Miz Montgomery was not a computer
whiz. This was too bad for her. I wondered, idly, what she had
done when her computer booted up on April First, and instead of
the Microsoft Windows 95 logo, it put up a burning Windows 98
logo? Truly the very thought was enough to make one ill.

I, on the other hand, could occasionally lay claim to the
title of wizard, or at least apprentice. Especially when
inspired. And even more especially when I had access to the
hardware as well as the software. It was no wonder the poor
woman had quit with that POS churning on her poor machine and
a huge deadline to make all th...

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Re: The Saga of Tuck Blooper Reel; Please add on!!! [message #1152] Mon, 08 September 2003 20:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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--I copied an older version of this blooper
--here's the real one! Sorry 'bout that!

***

Inside Debbie's room Take 23

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06:25 31 Oct

Tucker: So what am I wearing?

Debbie: This. [smiles and pulls out an outfit from her closet, lays
it out on the bed]

Tucker: Oh, nooooo... [moans with slightly paniced look]
[mental Voice Over:] I can't wear _that_!

Debbie: Ohhoh yes! [laughs] This is just _perfect_!

[Camera focuses in on bed to show a motorcycle-style black leather jacket,
a bustier thing with embroidery on it, in black, a black leather miniskirt
which looked way too short, and black fishnet stockings]

Debbie: [comes out of the closet ..]
[Debbie: comes out of the closet ..]
{{Debbie LEAVES the closet, glares at Narrator}}
Ha-ha-ha... I AM not gay! Whose idea of a joke was this! [flushes]
Not that there's anything wrong with that!

Tucker: Of course not! [shakes head with an amused grin] Some of my best
friends are gay..

Debbie: [glares at Tucker]

George: [from stage left, sticks his head in from around corner] Tuck! You
promised you wouldn't tell!!!

Director: [pulls hair]

***

[Updated on: Wed, 17 September 2003 18:47]

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Inside Debbie's room Take 32

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06:25 31 Oct

Tucker: So what am I wearing?

Debbie: This. [smiles and pulls out an outfit from her closet, lays
it out on the bed]

Tucker: Oh, nooooo... [moans with slightly paniced look]
[mental Voice Over:] I can't wear _that_!

Debbie: Ohhoh yes! [laughs] This is just _perfect_!

[Camera focuses in on bed to show a motorcycle-style black leather jacket,
a bustier thing with embroidery on it, in black, a black leather miniskirt
which looked way too short, and black fishnet stockings]

Debbie: [comes over with holding a pair of knee high black colored high
heeled boots, says enthusiastically] You're gonna blow the competition!

Tucker: No! I'm gonna be arr-- [starts to laugh] Debbie!!

Debbie: [flushes] arrghhh! [throws the boots back in the closet]
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Outside the School before the contest Take 152

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07:58 31 Oct

Tucker: [V.O.] I got a lot of looks going in, like I expected, but it was too
close to the first bell for anyone to hassle me. I slipped into
homeroom and made it to my usual seat before the bell rang, and
that's when the fun started.

Mike: Holy shit, is that- holy shit [said in prayerful tone]

Tucker: Debbie had an Idea.

Mike: [stares]

Tucker: [shrugs]

Mike: Jusenkyo? I told you to keep her away from those Ranma 1/2 videos!

Tuck: [looks like he wants to cry] No, you idiot chink! She did... aww damn
now we gotta do this take again!
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The Party at Lisa's House... Take 42

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Boorish Guy #3: Say... Has anyone ever told you you look like Maya Ibuki?

Tucker: [sighs]

***

The Party at Lisa's House... Take 56

***

Debbie: Hey, Val! [Debbie is standing at opposite side of room near
some stairs talking to boorish guy #4, only Debie can be seen
from the camera angle]

Tucker: Uh, Igottago!! sorrybye! [said quickly as he runs away
from boorish guy #3 to where Debbie is standing. Camera
focuses on his face as he sees that boorish guy #4 has his
arm around her waist, Tucker's face displays fear and a
bit of relief at having left BG#3 behind]

Bg#4: So, enjoying the party?

Tucker: [says nothing but gets an increasingly violent look on his face
stares intently into BG#4's eyes]

Debbie: Val?

Tucker: What? [looks from BG#4 to Debbie his face relaxing only slightly]

Debbie: Did you forget your ...'medicine' tonight?

Tucker: [looks at Debbie shamefacedly] Yah.... do you haf anyting our me ere?
[shifts gaze back to BG#4 and bares his teeth, camera zooms into show
that he sports a pair of unusally long incisors]

BG#4: [confused look] Uh...

Debbie: [tries to escorts Tucker away from BG#4]

Tucker: [looking back at BG#4] Just a little blood, please? [whines]

[people in general vicinity look at this interaction strangely]

Tucker: He won't miss it.

Debbie: No, you promised you wouldn't suck anyone's blood tonight, remember?

Tucker: Vut the hunger, Devvie, the hunger it groves vithin me...
[lunges at BG#4 but is pulled out of the shot at the last minute as
Debbie can be seen pulling a pair of cheap fangs from his mouth]

[General laughter can be heard in the background]

Director: [bangs head against nearest wall]
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Outside the restaurant Take 004

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09:36 1 Nov

Ms. Carstairs: Debbie, don't stay out too late, alright? We have some chores
to do this afternoon, remember? [arches her eyebrow]

Debbie: Yes, mom. [sighs]

Ms. Carstairs: Alright, then, you be good. [gives Debbie a hug]
Nice meeting you guys. [gets into Blazer]

Tucker: [makes choking motions]

Debbie: [elbows Tucker in ribs] Look happy. [said with a hiss while smiling]

Tucker: [smiles]

Debbie: Wave!

Tucker: [waves middle finger]

Debbie: [tries to break offending digit off Tucker's hand]
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Inside restaurant discussing the previous night.. Take 11

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10:09 1 Nov

Mike: They came in?

Debbie: Well, it was Lisa's house, and they have some kind of funky door
locks or something. So she thought it was someone else in there,
so she just popped it.

George: Oh, man, what were you doing?

[Tucker and Debbie giggle]

[minutes later they are still laughing]

Mike: Well, did you have your clothes on, at least?

Tucker: [points at Debbie]

Debbie: [still laughing, begins to giggle harder, then licks her fingers]

George: Your makeup's gonna run if you keep that up.

Tucker: [begins to laugh himself, flicks George the bird]

George: [Picks him up and carries him laughing and screaming out of the
room while sporting a leer and looking to and frow with a raised
eyebrow and tipping and imaginary cigar]
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Debbie's house, Ms Carstairs has left and the two of them are in Debbie's
bedroom getting ready for the 'big event'...
This is Take 34

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23:55 22 Nov

Tucker: Wakka wakka!

Debbie: [slides the robe she's wearing off. She is wearing a strapless black
dress which had a long straight skirt with a side slit]

Tucker: God, that's fantastic!

Debbie: [grins]

Tucker: [walks towards her, intent on kissing her]

Debbie: [grabs Tuck when he gets within range, pulls him over to bookcase and
starts tape]

Tucker: What are you doing?

Debbie: I am going to dance with you for a while. [grabs him around the waist
and holds his hand]

Tucker: You're gonna lead?

Debbie: Sure am, shorty! [grins]

Tucker: That's just 'cause you're wearing heels, Deb.

Debbie: And? [music starts and she pulls Tuck into something vaguely like a waltz]
You want to get your heels back on?

Tucker: They're not mine!

Debbie: Tonight, they are. Trust me.

[Suddenly with a sound like a tape being eaten by the player the song changes
from the aforementioned sexy waltz to 'I feel like a woman' by Shania Twain.]

Debbie: [laughs with a horrified look on her face]

Tucker: [sighs, the bulge in his panties disappearing as the mood shatters]
Alright, who changed the fucking tape?
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Debbie's house, Ms Carstairs has left and the two of them are in Debbie's
bedroom getting ready for the 'big event'...
This is Take 76

***

23:55 22 Nov

Tucker: Wakka wakka!

Debbie: [slides the robe she's wearing off. She is wearing a strapless black
dress which had a long straight skirt with a side slit]

Tucker: God, that's fantastic!

Debbie: [grins]

Tucker: [walks towards her, intent on kissing her]

Debbie: [pulls Tuck close, gazes into his eyes]

Tucker: What are you doing?

Debbie: [monotone voice]Do you want to be one with me? Heart, Mind, and
Soul? It could be real-- [bursts out laughing]
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At Lisa's house before Tucker's first date with Travis
Take 16

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18:07 13 Dec

Tucker: [is guided down a flight of stairs by Debbie, has sweat dripping
from face and looks visably nervous and slightly confused.

Debbie: [at half way down the steps, pauses, looks both ways then plants
long and gentle kiss on Tuck's lips--hands slightly scratching at
an exposed part of his back]
It'll be fine, Valerie. Travis is very nice, and he's not the
kind of guy to take advantage of you, so you'll be safe with him.
Just relax as much as you can, and enjoy the evening. He's really
okay. And when you're ready to call it a night, come back here,
and we'll take you home to my house so you can change, and you'll
be in your own bed before you know it.

Tucker: [takes deep breath, mummers lightly] I mustn't run away.. I mustn't
run away. . .

Travis: [hair is drawn back into a pony-tail, looks as though he needs
a shave] Wow.. you sound just like Shinjii--only I thought we were
going as Kaji and Misato, what gives? [does a one over on Tucker]
Now that I think about it, has anyone ever told you how much you
look like Maya? ..Valerie? Um...Val?

Director: This wasn't in the script!!
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I would add on, but you're doing it so well! Smile
Re: The Saga of Tuck Blooper Reel; Please add on!!! [message #1169] Fri, 19 September 2003 14:33 Go to previous message
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Thanks!

I decided to switch to script format after I realized
how much better it worked that way...but PLEASE don't
make me do all this by myself!! @_@' I'm sure that I'm
not the only one who has sat back and thought 'wouldn't
it be funny if... _insert idea_ happened?' and I'd think
this format would be the best\easiest for anyone wanting
to write a Tuck Fanfic but afraid to try anything longer.


-iWindoze
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